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Post by Marielle on Sept 12, 2011 19:02:00 GMT -6
I mean, I get what you're trying to say, and I like what you're trying to say, but the way it is worded is confusing. Is all that life is is a is grammatically correct, but that just looks wrong. So, idk. Maybe its fine...
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Post by Katrina on Sept 12, 2011 20:43:34 GMT -6
Yeah
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Post by Maddy on Sept 13, 2011 16:39:07 GMT -6
I wrote a poem today. I think I'm still working on it. But I really like how it's going. : )
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